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A traditional drawing with pencil :), yep, everything was done with pencil n.n hehe, I just added some color and texture on photoshop n__n. I did this drawing in the middle of the year, but I forgot to upload it xD lol. Hope that you like it!

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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

I really really LOOVE the linework you did with the hair :>All lines are effectively placed! It flows nicely and it's so incredibly neat- wonderful job. ^^

First issue is with the chest- study some more on female anatomy of that part- how it curves down the side, etc etc. It doesn't seems proportional with the rest of the body.

Continuing on, the face. I would downsize the eyes (I understand if it's manga-styled ^^I draw manga style but typically it would not be that shape, I'll go into why) and move it up the face a bit.
I really love the detail you worked with the eyelashes <33 SOOO BEAUTIFUL! As for the shape of the eye that I mentioned earlier- eyes are not that elongated when you view them from the side, manga styled or not. It usually looks like a wide sideways V. >Manga style does follow the proportional human body even if it is a variation of cartoon.

Wonderful job. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" title=":D (Big Grin)"/> I love it~